When we're having problems with a plot, a hero, anything, it's always useful to go back to basics.
This little snippet is from Chapter One - which is all about grabbing the reader on the first page.
"Consider any newspaper story. It doesn't start with ten years of back story, it starts with a headline.
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"They are designed to catch your attention, make you read on. Does your story start with a headline?"
I hope you'll make some time to visit other Six Sentence Sunday authors and leave encouraging comments. (They'll love you for it!)
Have a lovely day.