Today I'm snipping my six sentences from WILD FIRE, the third in my Beaumont Brides trilogy.
TV soap queen and West End star, Melanie Beaumont has accepted a bet from an old friend that she can't do an ordinary job for a month - take the Cinderella role and work as a cleaner.
She's just mad enough at everyone to give it a go. Her first job, cleaning up after a party that's got out of hand, goes pretty well - until the owner of the apartment arrives home earlier than expected...
Jack Wolfe's steel grey eyes flickered about the apartment and came back to rest upon Melanie as she wriggled out of Tom's grasp and got to her feet. She fielded the look, held it, refusing to be intimidated, but the man was not a bit like his brother.
Tom was young, still soft, with an eager puppy-like charm that ensured quick forgiveness of his doubtless many sins. She knew the type and kept firmly on a training lead he would be amusing company.
Jack Wolfe was darker, leaner, harder. A Doberman to Tom's Labrador.
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16 comments:
Oh intriguing six indeed. Well done!
Thanks, Alix. :)
Love this, Liz.
I have Wild Justice on my kindle, need more time to read!
Great hook, Liz
Sounds like a fun read. Great six :)
Thanks, Christine!
I just love, love, love that last line! Jack sounds like my kind of man :)
Oooh. Doberman. Yummeh man.
Love the puppy dog charm! Sensational six, Liz!
Thanks, Lex! He is a bit of big bad wolf!
The difference between the two brothers is very marked. Guess which one gets the girl!
Fun six. How did she end up in Tom's grasp while cleaning an apartment? Intriguing. . . .
Ooh, love the setup & the confusion - sounds GOOD. Excellent excerpt! Can't wait to read on...
They were making the bed, Karysa - being a puppy Tom took advantage of the situation, but he's just playing.
Hi Nic! About half way through Bollywood - love those movie scenes!
Thanks, Veronica. You can download the first book in the trilogy for free.
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